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INFAMOUS REVIEWER GIO's avatar

I'm no expert but the blue look purple to my eyes

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Ulysses's avatar

I'd tighten the leading on the title. Leading = https://designshack.net/wp-content/uploads/what-is-leading.jpg

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Henry Brown's avatar

Is that just a matter of moving it to the right or left?

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Ulysses's avatar

Leading is the space between each line of text. I think it would look better of there was less space between “threat” and “quotient”.

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Henry Brown's avatar

Oh, OK. I’ll see if I can tweak that. Thanks again.

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Man of the Atom's avatar

You could also lean into the mathematical element of "quotient" and separate the lines by a horizontal bar, making the lines look like a fraction ==> end result is a quotient.

https://ibb.co/3yrJC4Q2

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Henry Brown's avatar

Hmm. That doesn’t look too bad. What if I put info in that horizontal bar, like creators’ names, or the series title? Or would that look too cluttered?

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Man of the Atom's avatar

Play around with it and see. Best way to test these kinds of things is to do.

Would you like me to give you a few samples -- if so I'll post in chat.

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Henry Brown's avatar

Sure. I’m all ears. Or eyes. I’m all eyes.

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Man of the Atom's avatar

Four versions in chat.

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Man of the Atom's avatar

I agree with Ulysses on the title. Definitely pull them together more. Also, play with the height and width of the two lines. Example:

https://ibb.co/s95R5msq

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