Improvement, or Strike Two?
It seems fine as far as communicating what the story is about
…But…?
I mean it's fine, but I feel like it should have a tone of more epic proportions. But it's fine really.
It seems fine as far as communicating what the story is about
…But…?
I mean it's fine, but I feel like it should have a tone of more epic proportions. But it's fine really.